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My Hands Are Full

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My Hands are Full


Irreconcilable differences.
It was love at first fight.
I met and married her in a four post tikki bar.
Under a 2.99 per minute plastic flamingo sunset.

I've thrice divorced that girl from Ipanema.
You'd think i would have learned my lesson by now.
Perhaps i should write it on my hand.
If i can find the space.
This was a poem i wrote for *n03113 who bought me a DA subscription. Thanks!. I will write poems for 50 cents per line, note me if you would like one. :)
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wicked-eve's avatar
i missed alot of these, because i was away when you submitted them.
(my mom was sick around this time)
but i love it dear.
i remember reading it once before, and finding it difficult to come up
with something benficial to you're hard work. ;)

i absolutely love this line...

I met and married her in a four post tikki bar.
for some reason, it reminds me of a B-rated flick, done by some fresh off the wagon
film students.

you are such the boy of brilliance and many words. :heart: