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My Hands are Full


Irreconcilable differences.
It was love at first fight.
I met and married her in a four post tikki bar.
Under a 2.99 per minute plastic flamingo sunset.

I've thrice divorced that girl from Ipanema.
You'd think i would have learned my lesson by now.
Perhaps i should write it on my hand.
If i can find the space.
This was a poem i wrote for *n03113 who bought me a DA subscription. Thanks!. I will write poems for 50 cents per line, note me if you would like one. :)
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wicked-eve Jul 25, 2004
i missed alot of these, because i was away when you submitted them.
(my mom was sick around this time)
but i love it dear.
i remember reading it once before, and finding it difficult to come up
with something benficial to you're hard work. ;)

i absolutely love this line...

I met and married her in a four post tikki bar.
for some reason, it reminds me of a B-rated flick, done by some fresh off the wagon
film students.

you are such the boy of brilliance and many words. :heart:
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:icondevilishly-cruel:
I like the lines

You'd think i would have learned my lesson by now.
Perhaps i should write it on my hand.
If i can find the space.

Almost as if it isn't so important that you remember, but just a thought that maybe you should remember it someday :p. Anyways, nice poem, I usually don't like this style (more into the unanswerable questions and deep meaning poems that are sad) but this one is great! :)

I was just digging through your gallery ;) . Thanks for the comment LONG ago on Lost in a Crowd! :p
-Amanda
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:iconmrhide:
do you do 50 cents haïkus?
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:iconmibi:
a haiku would be one dollar and fifty cents for you... refer to [link] for details :hug:
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:iconsis:
Love at first fight :nod: now that... pretty cool said out loud to a deadpanned beat :)
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magentainred Sep 18, 2003  Student General Artist
you didnt take the shot..(interestin poem) sorry
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magentainred Sep 18, 2003  Student General Artist
aww i love the pink flamingos!!!!!! neat shot!
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:iconwanderingjizo:
i love the 2.99 per minute plastic flamingo sunset part. great.
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:iconevilfaeries:
Id pay you to write, but I have no money.
Maybe we can work something out.
(No. not that silly.)
(or that either)
I like the way this is really random. Its a good poem.

you really should write more.

:heart: Kandice
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wicked-eve Jul 25, 2004
i find it hard to believe i missed this comment.
are you always such a fucking retard..omg wait, you are.
my bad, ignore my flaming.
i just can't stand it when someone so distasteful opens their reject mouth
to utter "congrats" and "please" on something, she quite obviously can't grasp.
you know, love.
how on earth could a net-skank grasp the meaning of the word.
it is indefinitely beyond me.
regardless...the whole "no, not that silly" was utterly and completely skank on yer part.
as if mibs would even consider catching something from your std infected twat.

bleh.
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