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My Hands are Full


Irreconcilable differences.
It was love at first fight.
I met and married her in a four post tikki bar.
Under a 2.99 per minute plastic flamingo sunset.

I've thrice divorced that girl from Ipanema.
You'd think i would have learned my lesson by now.
Perhaps i should write it on my hand.
If i can find the space.
This was a poem i wrote for *n03113 who bought me a DA subscription. Thanks!. I will write poems for 50 cents per line, note me if you would like one. :)
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wicked-eve Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2004
i missed alot of these, because i was away when you submitted them.
(my mom was sick around this time)
but i love it dear.
i remember reading it once before, and finding it difficult to come up
with something benficial to you're hard work. ;)

i absolutely love this line...

I met and married her in a four post tikki bar.
for some reason, it reminds me of a B-rated flick, done by some fresh off the wagon
film students.

you are such the boy of brilliance and many words. :heart:
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devilishly-cruel Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2004
I like the lines

You'd think i would have learned my lesson by now.
Perhaps i should write it on my hand.
If i can find the space.

Almost as if it isn't so important that you remember, but just a thought that maybe you should remember it someday :p. Anyways, nice poem, I usually don't like this style (more into the unanswerable questions and deep meaning poems that are sad) but this one is great! :)

I was just digging through your gallery ;) . Thanks for the comment LONG ago on Lost in a Crowd! :p
-Amanda
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mrhide Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2003
do you do 50 cents haïkus?
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:iconmibi:
mibi Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2003
a haiku would be one dollar and fifty cents for you... refer to [link] for details :hug:
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sis Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2003
Love at first fight :nod: now that... pretty cool said out loud to a deadpanned beat :)
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magentainred Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2003  Student General Artist
you didnt take the shot..(interestin poem) sorry
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magentainred Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2003  Student General Artist
aww i love the pink flamingos!!!!!! neat shot!
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wanderingjizo Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2003
i love the 2.99 per minute plastic flamingo sunset part. great.
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evilfaeries Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2003   Writer
Id pay you to write, but I have no money.
Maybe we can work something out.
(No. not that silly.)
(or that either)
I like the way this is really random. Its a good poem.

you really should write more.

:heart: Kandice
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wicked-eve Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2004
i find it hard to believe i missed this comment.
are you always such a fucking retard..omg wait, you are.
my bad, ignore my flaming.
i just can't stand it when someone so distasteful opens their reject mouth
to utter "congrats" and "please" on something, she quite obviously can't grasp.
you know, love.
how on earth could a net-skank grasp the meaning of the word.
it is indefinitely beyond me.
regardless...the whole "no, not that silly" was utterly and completely skank on yer part.
as if mibs would even consider catching something from your std infected twat.

bleh.
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evilfaeries Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2004   Writer
Hahahahahaaahah.
your words mean shit to me, evie.
hahaha.
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wicked-eve Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2004
it meant enough to you kandice, that you would waste time replying to it.
if my words mean shit, why did you feel the need to reply?
wouldn't they then mean nothing at all, so then you would have no reason to take part in
my banter?

die cow.
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evilfaeries Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2004   Writer
I replied because at the moment I had nothing better to do. I reply to every comment I get. Whether it means something to me or not.

And its good to see you still havent grown up yet. That you still have to resort to name calling, and immature childish behavior. Grow up. Raise your fucking son, and move out of mommys house.

<3
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wicked-eve Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2004
i wouldn't go mentioning my life kandice when you dont know much about it.
nor would i say anything in a chance haste to try and get under my skin.
i, unlike you, have a university degree..and make more in a month then you do in a year at
your diner job.
how's that panning out for ya?
im guessing, as long as it's supplying you with your meth addiction...
then it's more then enough...since welfare, and the multiple people you use, fuck, get paid to fuck...
whatever--pay for all your other needs.

don't tell me to grow the fuck up kandice.
you're the one still trying to learn to get over her self-hate.
like omg, how high school.

and it isn't name calling, when the names hold truth.

*ahem* calling you a net-whore, isn't name calling.
it's stating a fact.
you have your cyber legs spread constantly.
how's your webcam??

loser.
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thesushiking Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2003  Professional Filmographer
thats funny, i was just talking to my repeat love interest today, we fought and swore at each other. interesting corresponding imagery, very tropical. i like the idea of not learning your lesson, and writing it on your hand, that's something one usually does not do with such important matters....
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iamnophotographer Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2003  Hobbyist Photographer
2.99 per minute plastic flaming sunset ;) :nod:

*orders u a 1 line poem (those are the hardest ones! :giggle: ) *
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derivablezero Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2003
:rofl: this seems like it has nothing to do with anything.. like everything else you ever say. but its great :worship: :rofl:
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jellycious Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2003
girl from ipanema..
:|
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n03113 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2003
I'd comment, but I'm too stuck..
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