"Blank Stairs"
She stairs.
Three flights down is her car.
Sedan. Four door. Twenty-one thousand miles.
In circles.
She was an artist once.
The smartest dunce.
Finger paintings mostly. Never sold a finger print.
Now she works five days for fity weeks. Filing. Typing.
Her sentence is run-on.
Never noticing the tessellating artistry of her cubicle horizon.
Her T's are crossed, eyes are glazed over.
Her tears are seeded
Where the sonnets will grow.
But they hold tight to old sights.
Pupils too contricted from the monitor glow.
She stairs.
Three flights up is the roof.
Sky. Four clouds. Twenty one mile view.
In every direction.
great play on words.
and the subject matter... that is one of the things that terrifies me the most.. the idea that i'll end up stuck in some dead end job doing the one thing i promised myself i wouldnt do... you've handled the topic so well and with so much originality.
This is as near a perfect work as I have ever seen.
And sorry it took me a day to get around to this. I've been very absent-minded lately.
punilicious
Good job!
DeadCow